Hey guys! So I'm participating at thelittlebang
this round, which is a multifandom femmeslash mini-big bang fic challenge... thingy. The initial creation stage is now over, which means that rough drafts are complete, and need to be beta-read by at least two people before October 17.
I've written a ~21,000-word Rosalie Hale/Leah Clearwater fic, and am sort of... lacking in betas. I'm hoping to get one
from the comm's official beta request post, but I'm not very optimistic about it, because, like I said, it's multifandom, and I picked a very weird fandom for femmeslash.
Anyway. I was wondering if any of you would be willing to beta for me (thereby gaining my eternal gratitude). I know it's a huge request, especially with school starting back up, but I would be very appreciative. My grammar should be more or less sound, so you'd mostly just need to nitpick awkward sentences, make sure the characters are IC, etc., and help me fix anything to do with the plot/flow. (Honestly, I am mostly worried about pacing, especially toward the end.) Even if one person wanted to handle the technical stuff like individual sentences/flow, and another person just wanted to focus on the overall plot/themes/abstract things, that would be 100% okay with me.
If you need to know more about the fic, it's: 21k words; Rosalie/Leah; rated R for Leah's language and one rather sexed up makeout session; and post-Breaking Dawn
, dealing with how Renesmee's presence puts a strain on Leah and Rosalie's respective home lives, personal feelings, ambitions, and humanity, and eventually causes them to (separately) leave home, after which they both end up living in the California redwoods for the summer in some ~escapism thing that they're both trying to figure out.
Anyway. I would really, really appreciate the help. So please let me know if you can! Thanks. ♥